editing

Who is your copy editor?
Caption on page 42
“On the other hand,Mississippi don’t have a lot of choices at all” brilliant!! doesn’t would have been much better!
or “On the other hand,The people of Mississippi don’t have a lot of choices at all”
or “On the other hand, Mississippians don’t have a lot of choices at all”

I like your way, it is way better ain’t it!?